I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Thursday, August 22, 2019
my music story starter
Hi this is a story I wrote after watching a music video called Language.I chose this video because it has a good beat I hope you enjoy my story
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey kushla.I like your story.It is very Inserting and the full stops are in the right place and I love your picture.I hope you have a great day and I can see a huge hand. would you go on a big huge hand? bye have a great day!
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