The last few weeks we have been doing news reports. You had to make your story that sound like a news report. We watched a video and wrote about it. I did my planning first then started writing. My writing was about a boy named Jim. He almost got ran over by a blue truck that was getting chased after police cars. Here is a photo of my writing.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
hi kushla i like how you did't put detail
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