This week we have been doing Description writing. We had to describe this describe picture. It's not much. Here is my writing.
Laughter echoes coming from the volleyball court as I walk past. Seagulls howl at the top of their lungs. Waves curl onto the soft sand. Dogs bark at the water with excitement. Dads’ scream “ I caught a fish hey boy can you pass me the bucket of fish,” with no please.
As I walk along the glistening beach the sand burns my feet. The sunblock cools my skin from the sizzling hot sun.
Hello Kushla.
ReplyDeleteCan you change your work so that it goes down the page so it's easier to read?.Thanks
Hello Kushla.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.