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Friday, September 6, 2019

my music story starter 2

In room 9 we have been learning about music. Mr martin my teacher piked three songs. I chose paradise that is my favorite song here is what I writ.


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  1. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2019 at 10:09 PM

    Hi Kushla.I love your work

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    1. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2020 at 9:19 PM

      Kia Ora It is kushla here. next time mabye you could add more writing in this comment.

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2019 at 9:36 AM

    Talofa Kushla it is Santannah your best friend, I really love your work.I see you have used punctuation. Maybe next time write some more writing. I have some few question, why did you pick this song? And why do you like it? Bye Kushla!

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    1. AnonymousFebruary 15, 2020 at 9:23 PM

      Hi satannah I have no best friends what are you talking about? I chose this song because I can. I dont know why I like it.

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2019 at 10:08 AM

    greetings kushla i like how you did the writing in purple it made me think of being in prisoner have you ever been in a zoo

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