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Friday, May 31, 2019

Diving

 in writing Mr martin my Teacher gave me five photos and I chose this one we had to write some ideas and then we writ the whole story Here's what I did


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  1. Mrs CassidyJune 1, 2019 at 2:44 PM

    Hello Kushla.
    Your story left me giggling :)
    I like how you explained what Mr Martyn had asked you to do and that you have included your ideas.You have used some good descriptive words.I could picture you trying to touch the baby monsters even though you weren't supposed too.
    If you ever got the chance,do you think you would go scuba diving?\I look forward to hearing from you.
    Have a super weekend.

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